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Please note that I based my work off David Schwartz and Pasquale Qualano. The reason I decided to draw the last 5 pages of this book was I felt I could offer a different take on what the previous artist did as well as serve as a bridge from Micah's work and my own as I was attempting a similar style.

Panel 1 Pretty much the same, but I wanted to add a lot of personality that I felt Micah was a master at. Carter being entangled in Captain Beard's beard, I wanted to show how horrified he was at being squeezed by by a beard. also put in the Capt for reference.

Panel 2 I changed her angle and put her hand to her face

Panel 3 I wanted it to be a dynamic also angle, where her blast was coming towards the reader and at the same time creating depth. I also wanted to set up that the scene takes place inside the medical facility as from the last page it wasn't clear if they were inside or out.

Panel 4 I felt was a little squished in the original. I pushed the camera back showing the control room as well as creating space for the dialogue boxes and added the Beyond crew (if you didn't get that reference shame on you).